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Sonntag, 13. Oktober 2013

EU individual paragraph


Legislature of the European Union


The process of creating, amending or abolishing laws in the EU is a long and complex procedure. It involves different actors: the European Commission, national parliaments of member states, the European Parliament and the Council of the European Union. While the Commission’s main role is initiating laws, the European Parliament and the Council of the EU are responsible for scrutinizing and amending legislation. In order to pass a law propositions need to be approved by both the European Parliament and the Council of the EU, which have equal importance in EU law. In the event of an objection to a new law by a member state national parliaments have a delaying power. A distinction is made between ordinary legislative procedure, which applies to numerous areas including agriculture and EU budget, and special legislative procedure used in sensitive areas. The European Parliament, the Commission and the Council of the EU are also in charge of revising the European Treaties that are comparable to national constitutions and are therefore the basis for all EU legislation. 






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Feedback from my classmate:

Bianca thinks that I used a formal, appropriate register. According to her my topic sentence is ok but could still be improved - we still did not find out what exactly is wrong with it. There's also a problem with the last sentence which will be discussed next time.